happy halloween with kurumi tokisaki

most of this looks great, but the pistol looks a bit off. flintlock pistols are usually a bit more ornate (and a bit less angular) than the one she's holding. it doesn't look like there is much to it, inasmuch as it lacking a firing hammer (you know, the bit that goes down when you pull the trigger so that it sets off the firing cap and the gunpowder.) to be sure, she has a nicely drawn body, so her tits, arms and legs look well proportioned and believable.

in summation, i'd say that you did a damn good job on this. you made her look cute and dangerous, which i think is a big success. just pay more attention to the fine details of the gun next time, i suppose, but that's not a big problem when it comes down to it.